idupath

Writing Coach

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idupath.com — IELTS Examiner Report

6.5

Band

✗ Below Canada target

Canada Express Entry requires Band 7.0 writing. Gap: 0.5 bands.

Examiner's assessment

Your introduction states a clear position and the essay structure is logical. However, your second body paragraph loses focus — you introduce a new idea without fully supporting the first, which an examiner will mark as a coherence weakness...

Marked in your essay

“The government should provides more funding for public services...”

'provides' → 'provide' after a modal verb. This pattern appears three times.

Task Achievement7.0
Coherence & Cohesion6.0
Lexical Resource6.5
Grammatical Range6.5

معلمونا

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Sarah Mitchell

Senior IELTS Examiner

4.9(847 sessions)

26 min

Avg delivery

±0.5 band

Accuracy

91%

Improved

11 years marking IELTS Academic papers. Previously an examiner trainer. Works with students targeting UK universities and Canadian study permits.

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James Okafor

IELTS General Training Specialist

4.8(634 sessions)

24 min

Avg delivery

±0.5 band

Accuracy

88%

Improved

8 years as an IELTS General Training examiner with a focus on immigration candidates. Has helped hundreds of students meet Canada Express Entry and Australian visa requirements.

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Dr. Mei Lin

TOEFL iBT Writing Expert

4.9(521 sessions)

29 min

Avg delivery

±3 points

Accuracy

93%

Improved

9 years scoring TOEFL iBT writing. PhD in Applied Linguistics. Has trained TOEFL scorers and helps students targeting competitive US and Canadian graduate programs.

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Tariq Hassan

CELPIP Specialist

4.8(412 sessions)

23 min

Avg delivery

±1 band

Accuracy

86%

Improved

7 years as a CELPIP tutor and assessor. Originally from the Middle East, now based in Canada. Helps Arabic-speaking and South Asian students reach CLB 7–9 for Express Entry.

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Priya Sharma

IELTS & CELPIP Tutor

4.7(389 sessions)

31 min

Avg delivery

±0.5 band

Accuracy

84%

Improved

6 years helping South Asian students improve their writing for IELTS and CELPIP. Strong focus on Task Achievement and Coherence — the two criteria where most marks are lost.

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Lena Weber

DET & TOEFL Writing Specialist

4.8(298 sessions)

27 min

Avg delivery

±5 points

Accuracy

87%

Improved

7 years scoring DET and TOEFL iBT writing for European and East Asian students targeting top US, UK, and Canadian universities. Strong focus on the production subscore and written expression in DET.

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لماذا نختلف عن ChatGPT

ChatGPT لا يعرف المعيار الرسمي.

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Scored on the official rubric

Not generic grammar feedback. Your essay is evaluated against the exact criteria an IELTS, CELPIP, or TOEFL examiner uses — Task Achievement, Cohesion, Vocabulary, Grammar.

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Tied to your immigration or study goal

Tell us you're targeting Canada Express Entry (CLB 7) or a UK university (Band 6.5). We tell you whether your score meets the requirement — not just a number in isolation.

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Specific, not generic

We quote actual sentences from your writing and explain exactly why they would cost you marks. You get a rewrite showing how an examiner would phrase it.

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Unlimited — submit as many as you need

One tutor session costs $60–100 and gives you feedback on one essay. Your prep pack includes unlimited submissions for the length of your plan.

الاختبارات المدعومة

IELTS Academic / General Training
  • Task Achievement
  • Coherence & Cohesion
  • Lexical Resource
  • Grammatical Range
CELPIP General

Band 7 = CLB 7 (Canada minimum)

  • Content & Coherence
  • Vocabulary
  • Readability
TOEFL iBT
  • Development
  • Organization
  • Language Use

نتائج الطلاب

IELTS5.5 → 6.5· Canada Express Entry

After three attempts I couldn't get past 5.5 in Writing. I submitted my Task 2 response here and the feedback told me exactly which paragraph was losing me marks and why. I got 6.5 in my next sitting.

Priya M. · India

CELPIP6 → 8· BC PNP

The feedback showed me I was writing emails that sounded too casual for the task. It even rewrote one of my sentences to show the tone difference. That was more useful than any YouTube video I'd watched.

Faisal A. · Saudi Arabia

IELTS6.0 → 7.0· UK university

I'd been using ChatGPT to check my essays but it kept telling me things were fine. This was completely different — it found specific sentences that would lose marks and explained the exact criteria reason.

Linh N. · Vietnam

Composite learner experiences. Not presented as verified public endorsements.

سعر الكوتش

أقل من جلسة واحدة مع مدرس خاص.

14-day Writing Coach

‏١٩٫٩٠ US$

one-time · no subscription

  • تقديم غير محدود لمقالاتك
  • تقرير الفاحص التفصيلي في كل مرة
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  • ملاحظات محددة من مقالتك الفعلية
  • 3 اختبارات تجريبية إضافية
  • تتبع التقدم وخطة يومية
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