يبدو أنك في United States
قم بالتبديل لرؤية الأسعار المحلية وإعدادات اللغة لمنطقتك.
درجة كتابتك،
يراجعها فاحص
حقيقي.
أرسل مقالتك. احصل على درجتك. اعرف إذا كانت تكفي لكندا أو جامعتك قبل يوم الاختبار.
6.5
IELTS Band
🇨🇦 Canada Express Entry — qualifies
Required: Band 6.0 · Your score: 6.5 ✓
🇬🇧 UK Skilled Worker — gap detected
Coherence is your main bottleneck
ما الذي تستعد له؟
ابدأCanada Immigration
🇨🇦Canada Study Permit
🇦🇺Australia Immigration
🇦🇺Australia / New Zealand Study
🇬🇧UK Visa / University
🇺🇸US University
درجة مجانية · بدون تسجيل
معلمونا
اختر معلمك. ابدأ الكتابة.
كل معلم متخصص في مسار مختلف. اختر من يناسب هدفك.
Sarah Mitchell
Senior IELTS Examiner
26 min
Avg delivery
±0.5 band
Accuracy
91%
Improved
11 years marking IELTS Academic papers. Previously an examiner trainer. Works with students targeting UK universities and Canadian study permits.
James Okafor
IELTS General Training Specialist
24 min
Avg delivery
±0.5 band
Accuracy
88%
Improved
8 years as an IELTS General Training examiner with a focus on immigration candidates. Has helped hundreds of students meet Canada Express Entry and Australian visa requirements.
Dr. Mei Lin
TOEFL iBT Writing Expert
29 min
Avg delivery
±3 points
Accuracy
93%
Improved
9 years scoring TOEFL iBT writing. PhD in Applied Linguistics. Has trained TOEFL scorers and helps students targeting competitive US and Canadian graduate programs.
Tariq Hassan
CELPIP Specialist
23 min
Avg delivery
±1 band
Accuracy
86%
Improved
7 years as a CELPIP tutor and assessor. Originally from the Middle East, now based in Canada. Helps Arabic-speaking and South Asian students reach CLB 7–9 for Express Entry.
Priya Sharma
IELTS & CELPIP Tutor
31 min
Avg delivery
±0.5 band
Accuracy
84%
Improved
6 years helping South Asian students improve their writing for IELTS and CELPIP. Strong focus on Task Achievement and Coherence — the two criteria where most marks are lost.
Lena Weber
DET & TOEFL Writing Specialist
27 min
Avg delivery
±5 points
Accuracy
87%
Improved
7 years scoring DET and TOEFL iBT writing for European and East Asian students targeting top US, UK, and Canadian universities. Strong focus on the production subscore and written expression in DET.
الدرجة مجانية. التقرير الكامل يتطلب باقة. عرض الأسعار →
كيف يعمل
ثلاث خطوات.
01
اختر هدفك ومعلمك
Canada، UK، جامعة أو تأشيرة. نختار المعلم المناسب لمسارك.
02
أرسل مقالتك
الصق ردك على سؤال الكتابة.
03
الدرجة فورًا. التقرير في 30 دقيقة.
درجتك فورًا. التقرير الكامل في بريدك خلال 30 دقيقة.
مثال على التقرير
هذا ما تحصل عليه.
Instant score
6.5
IELTS
🇨🇦 Canada Express Entry — You qualify ✓
Required: 6.0 each band · Your score: 6.5
Sarah Mitchell
Senior IELTS Examiner
Sarah's assessment
Your introduction states a clear position and the structure is logical. However, your second body paragraph loses focus — you introduce a new idea without fully developing the first, which an examiner marks as a coherence weakness...
Marked in your essay
“The government should provides more funding...”
→ 'should provide' — modal verb error, appears 3×.
How Sarah would write it
“The government should provide additional funding, as this would directly address the infrastructure gap...”
ماذا يقول الطلاب
من الدرجة المحجوبة إلى الدرجة المستهدفة.
Priya M.
IELTS Academic · Canada Study Permit
“Sarah highlighted a real sentence from my essay and explained the coherence issue in a way no YouTube video ever did. I got 6.5 on my next attempt.”
Feedback from Sarah Mitchell
Faisal A.
IELTS General · Canada Express Entry
“James knew exactly what Express Entry requires. His email arrived 30 minutes after I submitted — the rewrite suggestion was exactly what I needed.”
Feedback from James Okafor
Linh N.
TOEFL iBT · US University
“ChatGPT always said things were mostly fine. Dr. Mei Lin found specific argument structure problems and told me exactly how graduate scorers would read my introduction.”
Feedback from Dr. Mei Lin
Tariq H.
CELPIP · BC PNP
“He knew the scoring traps in CELPIP Task 1 emails. Three submissions later I hit Band 8 and submitted my provincial nomination application.”
Feedback from Tariq Hassan
Amara O.
IELTS Academic · UK University
“Within six weeks I went from 5.5 to 7.0 — the first time in four attempts. Priya told me which patterns were holding me at 5.5.”
Feedback from Priya Sharma
Priya M.
IELTS Academic · Canada Study Permit
“Sarah highlighted a real sentence from my essay and explained the coherence issue in a way no YouTube video ever did. I got 6.5 on my next attempt.”
Feedback from Sarah Mitchell
Faisal A.
IELTS General · Canada Express Entry
“James knew exactly what Express Entry requires. His email arrived 30 minutes after I submitted — the rewrite suggestion was exactly what I needed.”
Feedback from James Okafor
Linh N.
TOEFL iBT · US University
“ChatGPT always said things were mostly fine. Dr. Mei Lin found specific argument structure problems and told me exactly how graduate scorers would read my introduction.”
Feedback from Dr. Mei Lin
Tariq H.
CELPIP · BC PNP
“He knew the scoring traps in CELPIP Task 1 emails. Three submissions later I hit Band 8 and submitted my provincial nomination application.”
Feedback from Tariq Hassan
Amara O.
IELTS Academic · UK University
“Within six weeks I went from 5.5 to 7.0 — the first time in four attempts. Priya told me which patterns were holding me at 5.5.”
Feedback from Priya Sharma
Chen W.
IELTS Academic · Australia Skilled Visa
“Sarah showed me I was answering a different question than the one asked. No one had ever told me this clearly before. It changed how I approach every prompt.”
Feedback from Sarah Mitchell
Mohammed K.
IELTS General · Canada Express Entry
“James connected every piece of feedback to what the CLB requirement actually means. I felt like I was getting real immigration advice alongside the writing score.”
Feedback from James Okafor
Nguyen T.
IELTS Academic · Australia Study
“She knew the exact patterns that hold South Asian and Southeast Asian writers at 6.0. The rewrite suggestion made it click immediately.”
Feedback from Priya Sharma
Rania S.
CELPIP · Canada PR
“Tariq understood exactly where Arabic-speaking writers lose marks in CELPIP Writing. He pointed to vocabulary register issues I had never noticed.”
Feedback from Tariq Hassan
Chen W.
IELTS Academic · Australia Skilled Visa
“Sarah showed me I was answering a different question than the one asked. No one had ever told me this clearly before. It changed how I approach every prompt.”
Feedback from Sarah Mitchell
Mohammed K.
IELTS General · Canada Express Entry
“James connected every piece of feedback to what the CLB requirement actually means. I felt like I was getting real immigration advice alongside the writing score.”
Feedback from James Okafor
Nguyen T.
IELTS Academic · Australia Study
“She knew the exact patterns that hold South Asian and Southeast Asian writers at 6.0. The rewrite suggestion made it click immediately.”
Feedback from Priya Sharma
Rania S.
CELPIP · Canada PR
“Tariq understood exactly where Arabic-speaking writers lose marks in CELPIP Writing. He pointed to vocabulary register issues I had never noticed.”
Feedback from Tariq Hassan
Composite learner experiences. Not presented as verified public endorsements.
الأسعار
أقل من جلسة واحدة مع مدرس خاص.
بدون اشتراك. بدون تجديد تلقائي. ادفع مرة وابدأ.
Starter
3 teacher feedback sessions
≈ 3.30 US$ / جلسة
- ✓3 جلسات تغذية راجعة كاملة
- ✓درجة فورية + حكم الهدف
- ✓تقرير: سرد + معايير + إعادة صياغة
- ✓تقرير بالبريد في 30 دقيقة
- ✓جميع المعلمين الخمسة
Standard
8 teacher feedback sessions
≈ 2.49 US$ / جلسة
- ✓8 جلسات تغذية راجعة كاملة
- ✓كل ما في Starter
- ✓تتبع التقدم عبر الجلسات
- ✓تتبع الأهداف (كندا / جامعة)
Intensive
Unlimited sessions · 30 days
- ✓جلسات غير محدودة · 30 يوماً
- ✓كل ما في Standard
- ✓أرسل يومياً — لا حدود
- ✓مثالي للتحضير المكثف
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